dashmyoku's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Walking Skylines]

Chill is right-on.

I like this track, it's very chill, but still has a beat you can groove with. Kinda sad about the no horns thing, I can definitely see the horns working extremely well with this.

I actually might have a decent Sax soundfont you can use. Just hit me up if you want it.

Anyways, awesome track. 5/5 - 9/10 :D

Marks-a-lot responds:

I definitely want that horn sample but I have some errands I need to do first. I'll PM you later. thanks and glad you liked it.

[[W] Energy]

It's Nice...

If you meant this as a background track of some sort, then it fits that purpose. But for some reason, I don't think you meant it for that.

So, the first drop off at the beginning...I was definitely expecting a BIG section that flourished in trancey, pianoy goodness. But it kinda stayed at about 80% intensity. Then the second drop off came, so again...I was expecting something big and amazing. Didn't come.

That's my only complaint about this. Otherwise, it's a nice little trance track. :3

4/5, 8/10

weemeee responds:

Well to be completely honest with you, i kind of did want it to be a background track.
But then again i didn't. x)
But yeah i get what you mean.
Thanks for the constructive review :) I appreciate it ^^

Grtz ~ [W]

[Modern hiphop/synth/rap thing]

Nice

Really? Someone gave you a 1/5? Bullshit. lol

Anyways, just as a beat, it's nice. You need some BASS, though. Make me feel that shit. lol

Other than that, I don't have much to complain about. I'm just curious to hear it when you get the lyrics recorded. 4/5-9/10...for now. If get the completeled tracked with lyrics up, that may change.

Keep up the good work man!

mrevaaaaa responds:

Thanks a lot homie!

[no name yet sorry![wip??idk]]

For a Wip...

It's not bad. A little cookie-cutter in my opinion. Then again, it's just a wip. I'd like to see how you make this track move. :3

3/5-6/10

dynamizer responds:

do not worry! for the cookies will be baked!

[Creation and Creator]

Not bad

Earthbound is right about the "Gaps" of nothing...well, nothing with drums. And the little stabs around 1:12 I think?

I could definitely see some sort of bass-line goin' with this, but you don't have one. The main melody is good...but I feel you play it too much. Maybe mix it up a bit so it's not so "the same?" I would also suggest adding a secondary lead for the main melody to compliment the main lead.

A little progression wouldn't hurt this piece either. Though the little solo bit at the end was nice.

Overall, it's not bad, but you could definitely make it better. Keep up the good work! :D

4/5-8/10

Kuma-AKA responds:

Thanks for the review! I guess i could add a bassline. In the begining i was trying to go for a more ambient approach but i think it ended up something... BIGGER.
Anyways thanks again for the review:)

[Memories of Melodies (demo)]

Soothing...

Ok, so apart from this being a really nice piece...I think you start it off too strong. Try lowering the velocity on things...you know, give it a "flow," if you will. But don't make it too soft...just soft enough to get the point across. And then, when you have the choir come in, build it up to that and then make it big. Hell, you might get a tear or two from someone doin' that sort of thing. :P

Keep up the good work man, I'm anxious to hear the final product.

KTRECORDS responds:

I'll be sure to do that. I've already got an intro idea in place that I'm sure you'll love. This is of course just a demo, so I couldn't include everything I have. Just wait till the full version comes out, hopefully it'll blow you away =).

-Jason
KTRECORDS

[-Control: Crowd-]

Damn it all...

Why can't I make Techno like you? Totally jealous. Keep up the awesome work.

Waterflame responds:

Hehe, thanks XD dont worry, keep at it and you'll beat me in no time! ;) my thing issnt really even dark techno to be honest. its more songs like -Glorious morning- etc ;) i guess im still learning this whole techno deal. but by the looks of it im doing well so far :D