lol
Well, I really wouldn't consitute this as a "remix." If I were to rate it as a remix, well...you wouldn't get good scores from me.
Now, as a cover, it's pretty good. Fast-Techno stuff is always fun. But, that's about all I can really say about it. It's nothing different from the original track.
Good stuff though. 4/5-8/10
I like
The track as a whole is a little soft...maybe turn up the main volume a little bit?
My other issue is the "metal" part didn't really feel "metal" to me. Gotta bring out that guitar and make it more heavy...maybe even a small, sweet-ass guitar solo?! lol
Other than those two things, the piece is solid. Really nice work. *Fav'd*
4/5-9/10
Nice
Really? Someone gave you a 1/5? Bullshit. lol
Anyways, just as a beat, it's nice. You need some BASS, though. Make me feel that shit. lol
Other than that, I don't have much to complain about. I'm just curious to hear it when you get the lyrics recorded. 4/5-9/10...for now. If get the completeled tracked with lyrics up, that may change.
Keep up the good work man!
Thanks a lot homie!
For a Wip...
It's not bad. A little cookie-cutter in my opinion. Then again, it's just a wip. I'd like to see how you make this track move. :3
3/5-6/10
do not worry! for the cookies will be baked!
Not bad
Earthbound is right about the "Gaps" of nothing...well, nothing with drums. And the little stabs around 1:12 I think?
I could definitely see some sort of bass-line goin' with this, but you don't have one. The main melody is good...but I feel you play it too much. Maybe mix it up a bit so it's not so "the same?" I would also suggest adding a secondary lead for the main melody to compliment the main lead.
A little progression wouldn't hurt this piece either. Though the little solo bit at the end was nice.
Overall, it's not bad, but you could definitely make it better. Keep up the good work! :D
4/5-8/10
Thanks for the review! I guess i could add a bassline. In the begining i was trying to go for a more ambient approach but i think it ended up something... BIGGER.
Anyways thanks again for the review:)
Epic
Sounds really freakin' awesome. What'd you use for your sounds? I must have...they sound fantastic. :P
Soothing...
Ok, so apart from this being a really nice piece...I think you start it off too strong. Try lowering the velocity on things...you know, give it a "flow," if you will. But don't make it too soft...just soft enough to get the point across. And then, when you have the choir come in, build it up to that and then make it big. Hell, you might get a tear or two from someone doin' that sort of thing. :P
Keep up the good work man, I'm anxious to hear the final product.
I'll be sure to do that. I've already got an intro idea in place that I'm sure you'll love. This is of course just a demo, so I couldn't include everything I have. Just wait till the full version comes out, hopefully it'll blow you away =).
-Jason
KTRECORDS
Epic
Yes, this is very epic. Puts my Vampire Killer remix to shame. xD
Awesome work.
Simply Amazing
Just...wow. I'm glad you actually got it as close to finished as possible. The WIPs were awesome 'n such, but I just wanted to hear it completed. Everything about this track makes me jealous of you. lol
At any rate, you're right about the verses sounding basic, but that's a minor problem in my eyes. All in all, very awesome work. *Favorites*
Damn it all...
Why can't I make Techno like you? Totally jealous. Keep up the awesome work.
Hehe, thanks XD dont worry, keep at it and you'll beat me in no time! ;) my thing issnt really even dark techno to be honest. its more songs like -Glorious morning- etc ;) i guess im still learning this whole techno deal. but by the looks of it im doing well so far :D
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